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Your voice compels me to create
It puts me against the greatest monument of perfection just so I could attempt to match it
Try, just go-ahead try
To compare with the devilish beauty of the songs that flow from your words
I have no choice but to sway with your rhythm
Even your trips have grace that swell higher than the expectations of man

But hear me when I say I do not love you
I could not love you; it is not light on my heart or sweet on my mind
It is something much heavier and dark
Weighing down on my lungs, holding me to earth
Something deep that dare not reveal its name
For whenever I even imagine my lips forming the frame of your reference
I tear at my soul, rage at my flesh,
Rip away the simple human existence that I bare

I would gash away every last morsel of me if it were to compare to you
You and the monuments you leave behind you as you play through this world
Treading through this existence
Waiting to get back to where you must have come
To tell of tales of those who carved themselves around you
And built memories of your inadvertent glory

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Oh dear Tahno what have I done? Has the great Calin fallen victim to-to emotion?! What madness is this?


I am actually sort of proud of this one.

Something that was inspired by King Charles the musical artist's song "Lovelust"
I absolutely love this man, he is a true inspiration and has a fabulous artistic eye. I hope this does him justice.

Enjoy




Oh and please do help a writer out.
Tell me what you think.






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~TeukkiSS Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist
strong expression, have no idea how one can put feelings or thought into words like this. im in awe
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~Calin-4 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much for this lovely compliment :aww: i am really very excited you liked it so much
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~TeukkiSS Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist
my pleasure : ) truly, i can't put even my own thoughts into words.. hehh, texts like this are way beyond me
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:iconprobero0:
I think it's very expressive and although a personal experience is being reflected there, it's broad/general enough for anyone to be able to relate. Well done!
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~Calin-4 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you ever so much, I almost never know how to respond to these humbling compliments.
I am glad you enjoyed it
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Don't need to know how to respond really, just need to know to keep going with the amazing works! ;P
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~Calin-4 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw shucks, thank you once again. ;D
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You're welcome (once again? o: )
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~Calin-4 Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just find myself thanking you so frequently. I feel like a broken record ^^
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Well nowadays, a record, broken or not, is quite a find. Definitely a collector's item! :p In all seriousness, it's all good; just hopefully I'll be able to offer some kind of useful feedback at some point.
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